Q1;
After completing my WP2, I was happy with the articles I choice. I was very interested in my topic and therefore had a lot of fun writing it. I was also very happy with the organization of my essay. I think it was easy to follow, and easy to understand the theme of my essay. On the other hand, I was not really happy with paragraphs. My organization was very chronological and easy to follow, but I just had a hard time deciding where to split my paragraphs so that they would not be to long. I also think maybe I could have organized my thoughts slightly better. Because of all the questions we had to answer, I sometimes felt I was losing my argument while I was writing my paper.
Q2:
The two or three comments that were the most helpful were those regarding my argument and clarification. While my partner was reading my paper, she made sure to tell me that my argument had to be more clear. As of now, she said, "it does not seem like you are arguing anything." This comment helped me rethink the theme of my paper and helped me decide exactly what I wanted to argue. In addition, my partner also said that I should clarify what some of the words we learned in class, since I do not want to assume that my audience already knows the definition of those words.
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